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+ APH: Wy-chan + by Serket-XXI + APH: Wy-chan + by Serket-XXI

Program: Adobe Photoshop CS6
Tool: Wacom Bamboo Pen
Draw takes 1 hour 40 minutes

Axis Powers Hetalia is a copyright of Hidekaz Himaruya/Gentosha Comics Inc.
Art (C) Me.
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Ah, I haven't done a critique in ages. Well, why not do one now? :)

First off, I absolutely love the color scheme. It looks so light and it makes me feel all warm and fluffy on the inside! You chose really good colors for the highlights and shadows and the way you placed the values are really well done!

So, to start on things you can improve on. I don't really see much, just basic proportions - the head is a bit too big for the body. Also, the lineart - it's a bit on the shaky side. I myself have used Adobe Photoshop and there are a few tricks on making the most flawless lineart out there. I would highly recommend using the pen tool instead. (Here's a wonderful tutorial that helped me out a lot: [link])
Another thing is your light source. Where is it coming from? It's really difficult to see and because of the blank background it feels a bit overwhelming.

Either way, great job. I hope this critique helps you make more beautiful artwork :heart:
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HoneyBeeGirl94 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2014
My sassy baby. 
Oki-The-Awesome-123 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really great!
(id put a critique but i'd most likely have not enough to say for it ^^;)

Although, I do see one or two things you can improve on.
First is the lighting; It seems as if its coming out of nowhere and stopping quite abruptly.
Second is the lines. They look a little shaky around the lower half of the drawing. (Of course, I'm not one to judge; my lines do that more than 80% of the time  ^^;)

but other than those things this is a really really great drawing.
now with my criticism, i'll put some things i absolutely LOVE about this drawing!

I really like the eyes. They make her look as if she'd smiling through her eyes!
I also like her facial exprssion. She looks like she's happy, but has something on her mind; it reminds me of some of my charachters.

well, i hope i helped!
GoldenGirl954 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012
How cute :meow:
angel-chiyo Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
D'aww. I love Wy.
FlopyLopez Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Her face looks really cute, I see improvement! :D
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